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My Mum Dad <reg>sister</reg> and me have bought a dog and his name is <gap desc="name"> . My dog is a boy his <reg>colour</reg> is <reg>ginger</reg> and white he is nine years old his name is <gap desc="name"> he is very little he can run very fast he has a collar and lead.

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 incorrect uses of words and spellings, 'sisster' 'coular' 'jinger' 

No use of punctuation, 'My mum dad sisster and me have..' 

My mum, dad, sisster and me have bought a dog.